It is better to go directly to college after highschool. There are many benefits for the post-highschool student when sttending college immediately after high school. Statistics show that people who work right after highschool usually do not go back to school. There are many more freshmen who are 18 or 19 years of age than those who are a few years older.

They already have study habits from being in highschool and have a higher chance of losing those habits if they work rather than go to college. You might lose important skills such as social, studying and thinking skills. You will develop long-term friends who are your age, and meet people who can help you adjust to college life.You get more out of your college experience if you go right away because you are around people your age. If you are older and going to college you might have a family or other responsibilites that make it more difficult to hang out with "younger" people. In highschool there are people/counselors around to help you get ready for college and apply for aid, such as scholarships, loans and grants. People might be afraid to go back to college because lack of money and they do not know how to fill out the appropriate forms.

A living example comes from a man named Larry who worked directly after highschool at HOM Furniture instead of going to college to save money for a car. He got decent grades in highschool but when he decided to go back to college he never studied and had no idea what he was doing. Also, he was older, by three years, than the rest of the students at his campus so when he wanted to go out and drink with friends nodody was old enough.. He ended up dropping out because his study habits were so rusty and his grades were bad.

Some agrue that people need to save money if they do not qualify for any financial aid. Most colleges are reasonable when disributing subsidized loans as well as work study options that make it easier for a student to fund thier education. Some people might not be mature enough to handle college and they might be wasting their money. Going to college can make a person grow up very fast. The experience of being out on your own and being the only one responsible for your actions can be a real awakening experience for anyone.

. In conclusion, going to college directly after highschool is more beneficial because in the long-run, you will learn more, get a better education and a better job.

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