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Evaluation of Journal Writing - Individuals
Name of Child_______________________________
Date______________________________________
Content Dimensions (Adapted from High Scope
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Handwritten-Beginning
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Handwritten-End
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Computer-Beginning
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Computer-End
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Descriptive detail about objects, persons, and events |
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Objects, persons, events, actions (naming them)
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Attributes such as color, texture, shape, length, size, weight,
temperature, taste, light, speed, rhythm, gender, age, feelings, sound,
pitch, etc. |
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Quantity terms and relationships (a lot, a little, number,
cupful, inch, numerical relationships, some, all, most of, the rest
of,
bigger than, smaller than, etc.) |
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Space and spatial relationships (behind, next
to, on top of, symmetry, enclosure) |
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Sounds associated with objects or actions (buzz, whirr, boom,
eek, etc.) |
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Time and temporal relationships (date, season, first,
last, next, earlier, later; two o'clock, yesterday; duration, at the
same time,
while, during) |
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Description of how something was done |
Actions that produce changes in materials (cutting, gluing,
tearing, baking, cutting apart, etc.) |
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Combining materials (mixing, sorting, stacking) |
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Who did what and/or how they did it |
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Giving directions about how to do something |
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Discussion of problems and solutions |
Problems that stood in the way of plans |
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Solutions to problems |
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Explanation of actions of outcomes |
Causal statements (if...then, because) |
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Purpose of object or event (I'm making a bunny for Easter) |
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Why something happened or didn't happen (car didn't run because
it was out of gas) |
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Narrative with setting, character, plot and storyline |
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Predictions (the plant gets no sunlight so it will die) |
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Conclusions (things will spread better if they are heated
up) |
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Quantity of Writing Elements |
Number of words |
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Number of sentences |
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Number of punctuation marks |
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Number of "invented" spellings |
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Number of nouns |
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Number of verbs |
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Comments about the child's basic computer skills as described
in unit of practice one (open and save files, word processing skills, "tool" skills,
keyboarding skills, etc.):
Comments about the childrens' interactions based on American
Indian
values as defined in the Standards section:
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